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About Me Member General Poet riistar23/Male/New Zealand Recent Activity Deviant for 7 Years
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Too little too late...

Mon Sep 26, 2005, 7:03 AM
Ever wonder how you ended up this way?
In this Place? Doing this thing that you do?

The days crawl by, that single grain; never hitting the bottom.
Of that hour glass figure...

Of bottled opportunity, devotion, and mixed emotions of this physical plain that we infest...

Dragging feet do, stand behind a counter 8hours a day.
Shitty pay. A cleche life that isnt any different.
So pointless is the smiling, nodding, and conversations with strangers; that realisation becomes nothing as the fake smile produced is followed by the drone like sigh saying "Have a nice day" as slowly this all sinks away.

The jumbled anguish; pushing on it becomes more than your life...
it becomes that life... a distant place that you'd rather not be.

Dramatics of actions and non-actions; lost opportunities.
What happened to the dream? That bubble burst.
Lost to what was wish and now is reality, as cold as it could be.
The ant never had much say, it does as its told, as its ordered, as it conforms;
to once be noticed, reguarded for skills learnt and competence shown.
The last things left, of this hapless soul, out of control...

Be more than you are now...
Become more than you will ever be...
To Be Me.

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Devious Info

  • Current Residence: New Zealand
  • Interests: Poetry and stuff...
  • Favourite movie: The Boondock Saints, Donnie Darko
  • Favourite band or musician: The Feelers, and many others...
  • Favourite genre of music: Metal, Dark, Techno/Trance/House
  • Favourite artist: DeadDreamer
  • Favourite poet or writer: Anne McCaffrey
  • Favourite style of art: 3D
  • Operating System: Windows
  • MP3 player of choice: Winamp
  • Shell of choice: viper.kire.net
  • Wallpaper of choice: Pulsar - By DeadDreamer
  • Skin of choice: Zorg - By DeadDreamer
  • Favourite game: Max Pyne
  • Favourite gaming platform: 1st Person
  • Favourite cartoon character: Elmo
  • Personal Quote: The silent cries fall on deaf ears, as you walk out hells gates...
  • Tools of the Trade: Pad, Pens, Pencil, Caffine, Fone, And occasonally my frail imgination...

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Hey I saw that you were from New Zealand, so I just thought I would pimp out this club to you - [link]
You should stop by
:cake::party:Happy Birthday to you!!:cake::party:

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change is good, you go first.
Light travels faster than sound, which is why a person can appear bright, until they open their mouth.
hating me won't make you pretty.
Tackle hug!!! :hug: Glad to see you around again :D things are ok with me, we'll have to play some catch up soon.

So, where'd you go and why did u go there?

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The night has a thousand eyes, And the day but one; Yet the light of the bright world dies, With the dying sun. The mind has a thousand eyes, And the heart but one; Yet the light of a whole life dies, When love is done.
~ by Francis W. Bourdillo
Away Far Far away, amoungst clouds of grey and the moonlight.
To dream of my plight, venture; that step of fate.

The unknown, to be hidden and yet feared.
While my mind plays tricks and the shadows creep;
to once again awake from sleep...


Oooo thats like the first thing i've written in how many months! :O_o:

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:nirvana: "Not all who wander are lost" :confused:
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well, least unlike me you can write something

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The night has a thousand eyes, And the day but one; Yet the light of the bright world dies, With the dying sun. The mind has a thousand eyes, And the heart but one; Yet the light of a whole life dies, When love is done.
~ by Francis W. Bourdillo
??? where'd ya go :(

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The night has a thousand eyes, And the day but one; Yet the light of the bright world dies, With the dying sun. The mind has a thousand eyes, And the heart but one; Yet the light of a whole life dies, When love is done.
~ by Francis W. Bourdillo
IM baaaack!

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:nirvana: "Not all who wander are lost" :confused:
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Check Em Out!
~dark-writing~~etoilerose~*with-pen-in-hand~`deaddreamer~~dcmbrnite
:cake::airborne::cake::airborne::cake::airborne::cake:
:party: HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!!!:party:
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'Ello. I classify you as a literary deviant. As such, you qualify for a watch, as long as you respond. I am trying to round up as many writers as possible, because we simply don't get enough recognition. So we will have to give each other recognition instead. So if you comment me, I'll do the same for you. I make it a matter of pride to leave in depth critiques, and value my DevFriends.

What do you think?

(please note that I am away this week - so it might be a little while before I get back to you)

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A storm is rising.

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